by drrtymined
I Love this series! Please add more chapters. Maybe a wedding or two down the line?
I've got another story coming that'll probably have a 2nd chapter, but then I may get back to Home for the Holidays. I think Jennifer & Siobhan's wedding will be far more sweet than sexy, with brides in white, small group of friends & family celebrating their love, with nothing spicier than the kiss. The bachelorette party, though.... now that may be deliciously depraved!
I liked the first half, where the two sisters found each other. You wanted to get something very imaginative out of the second half, but it was forced. A "simple" pussy licking, strap-on sex would have been much better. I don't think you need more in a lesbian porn story. The point is that it should be written neatly and selectively.
I'm waiting for the next work!