by jack_silver
This should be in 'loving wives' decent scenes but never a given explanation for the seduction of the woman.
Strongly prefer first person or narrative point of view. When I read these I can't get the idea of the author talking directly to me... which is a strange thing to focus on when reading erotica. I don't care for it.
I know it's just personal preference, but I thought it was worth mentioning in case it hadn't occurred to you.
What an amazing story. Well-constructed narrative. Keep writing. By brasil
What an amazing story. Well-constructed narrative. Keep writing. By brasil