All Comments on 'Home on the 4th of July'

I loved the story! Well written and paced, good revenge. One of the reasons I loved it was the fulfilling a wish, all the stars align style of being with his hot teacher that he had daydreams of. If the teacher part is done and it just continues with him and the average looking slut, not sure it will have the same draw to it.

I would read another chapter and see how it went, just my thoughts right now.

I loved the story! Well written and paced, good revenge. One of the reasons I loved it was the fulfilling a wish, all the stars align style of being with his hot teacher that he had daydreams of. If the teacher part is done and it just continues with him and the average looking slut, not sure it will have the same draw to it.

I would read another chapter and see how it went, just my thoughts right now.

I wish I would get the chance to fuck my Science Teacher. I saw her a few years after I graduated. She got a fat ass after she had her second kid, so she was even hotter.

Thanks for making me think of her again!

Freshman year of college French teacher for me.

Loved it, but I’m not convinced part 2 with Ellie is right. How about Mrs Bartholomew or another teacher who hears of the story and wants a sample?

Great story, hot sex. Too bad Lawrence didn't cum in Mrs Kime's pussy, and show her ex a big cream pie inside his former wife. Looking forward to a second part, maybe a turn with the ex husband's now ex girlfriend.

For what it's worth, have someone proofread your story before it goes on the site. Generally well written, but a few grammatical errors("too" when the word should be "to", a couple other things here and there), which detract from the flow of the story. Otherwise nicely done.