All Comments on 'Hometown Girl'

Although much too short, this is a lovely story, but it really should have been placed in the Romance genre, as the marvelous romantic mood pervades the plot from start to finish.

*****Very erotica piece of storytelling your storyline seem to come out of no where, but it worked am I sensing a four part storyline since there was four in the shop? Great read. Thanks for sharing.

Great story what else will she do keep it going you have me hooked.

Too much flowery description. Storyline might have been good if I could have gotten that far