All Comments on 'Honey Ch. 04'

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MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 years ago

Like what you are trying to do, I think, but storyline is too convoluted and characters too predictable/stiff, which is a bit of an oxymoron: convoluted story with less than convoluted characters. Feel like yelling “what the hell is going on here?” Still on board.

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