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Click here"SEND ME ALL THE WAY IN THIS TIME, ROBERTA!"
Herbie smiled and held his breath as he disappeared inside her giant pussy.
THE END
- COMMENTS
Hofeeder3 months agoAuthorAnyone up for a sequel. It was great fun to write and I thought this weird and campy take on erotica would be much more popular than it is. What did I do wrong? Maybe it's to rapy? I don't know. Not rapy enough? lol Maybe it wasn't as humorous as I thought it was. I would really like some detailed and serious feedback on this particular story. Of all my posts on Literotica this is the one I truly thought would go viral and blow away the competition. Why hasn't that happened? Don't hold back. Does me with reality. I need to know. Thank you
Anonymous9 months agoNice story a very interesting parity of Honey I shrunk the kids you should add to the story maybe a few alternate endings or even a epilogue where we find out if they have a baby together or even a follow up with what happened to all the sperms that went into the woods or if he cured them all or not or even maybe make the next story be a time travel story or even have it be like the story from honey I shrunk the kids tv series were they some how go into a relatives body because they accidentally shrunk the car
Anonymous9 months agoPleeease write a stand alone story about a bunch of giant sperm cells forcing their way into an ovulating woman's holes.
Anonymous9 months agoThanks for including the giabt sperm cells! I wish there were more stories about giant sperm cells forcing their way into an ovulating woman. 🥰
SouperKev7779 months agoBad Girl Bad Girl whatcha gonna do whatcha gonna do when they send the sperm police for you!!!!
Anonymous9 months agoSTOP SHOUTING YOU RUDE ASSHOLE. Mixed case and punctuation marks have been available electronically since the era of the Timex Sinclair. Hope that helps.
Hofeeder9 months agoAuthorWhackdoodle, thank you for your excellent negative comment and sharing your insights on my mental state. Now I understand the one and two star ratings I'be occasionally received. I have offended you. AWESOME! I shall own that transgression against your sensitive, delicate and superior character, as well as all other readers with a similar nature, and accept the consequences of your one and two star punishments. I truly hope my story has scarred you for life. May the halls, stairwells and back alleys around your therapy sessions resound and echo with loud sobbing and the name HOFEEDER shouted out in anguish for many decades to come. Oh, the horror! The horror!
Hofeeder9 months agoAuthorI see a lot of low ratings. You people have no sense of humor or appreciation for a well thought out conclusion to a completely ridiculous story. This was NOT easy to write, but I'm damn proud of it, so screw your low ratings of three or less stars. I can begrudgingly understand four stars due to the very low erotic content, but anything less than four is just someone being a prick. I worked very hard on this entire series, especially this conclusion, and that work shows. So, for you jerks who slap three or less stars just to get off on being a dick, your low ratings are laughable to me and only reflect what a petty and uninformed ashore you are.
