All Comments on 'Honeymoon'

The sex could have been a little hotter. You should use the word pussy or vagina instead of love mound. It was an ok story to start with. Keep trying.

it really wasnt hot

i agree with previous poster...way to much use of the word love.....love hair? really? dampened curls silken fur . love lips? try varying your words.dewy petals, soft folds, velvet sheath., the basic idea is good. for descriptive ideas try reading some romance novels to get some ideas for creatively describing female (and male) anatomy.

Very nice when a wife is nicely fucked by someone other than her husband. Also wonderful that he has a thick cock

It is my dream that my mature wife is fucked by someone with a large and thick cock

I never want to read “moist love lips” ever again 💀