All Comments on 'Hooked and Baited'

MMMMMM vey hot!!

Well done!

Excellent work.

There are a few parts of the story that confuse Jason with Alex, and there are a couple of moments that switch from third-person to first-person. A bit distracting, but it detracts little from the story.

The first hypnotic session was captivating, the second hypnotic session felt slightly redundant (though it did serve a purpose), and the third hypnotic sessions was unnecessary at that point considering how on board Alex was, nevertheless it was sexy.

Even without the hypnosis, it's a very hot fantasy. The hypnosis just made it better by having Jason plant the seed and encourage Alex along. As for the experience... it feels amazing.