by SissyLydia
So, when after : Please consider so, after . . .
Grinded / ground my ass . . .
Two adjacent sentences that both start " I then . . . "
Despite our differences, as above, your story continues to be really 'top shelf!'
very good would like it to continue a couple more times and they fall in love
I like the storyline. It would be nice if we got a little more back story. Hopefully that information will be provided in future chapters.
"I was probably going to need to buy some extra-large condoms if I was going to continue having sex with my dad."
-possibly the greatest line on literotica