All Comments on 'Hooker for Daddy'

A beautiful story, very hog and sensitively written. I hope there will be a follow on

Incest and TG I loved everything about this! Please keep writing more

"the reside of cum from his cock* only need example of what a Proof Reading should turn up; there are others. It is the Proof Reading that takes a submission to the top. Small things can/will decrease your score. BTW, your story is quite well done, despite minimal staging and/or back story.

Incest seriously? You disgusting.

I loved it , some spelling errors but still hot

There wereva couple before thus but 'reside" for residue was too much not to comment upon.

Good story with an awesome premise, awaiting his return from business trip

First, I liked the story idea. Second, they are after me for every spelling and grammar error too, don't let them get you down. Third, they are not wrong it is a little distracting. There are tons of editors that are willing to edit your work for free.

I liked the story and loved the incest component. I wanna see where you take this.

Very hot