All Comments on 'Horseplay: A Fun FemDom Adventure'

I was looking forward to award this story with five stars when it suddenly stopped. Only two stars, sorry.

Needs more chapters. Very much a replay of the story by Azrael called Sweet November.

If it is the begining, well. Waiting.

Yes, it kind of tailed off didn't it? A shame really because I was just getting into it.

Great start and middle, getting me interested and then the ending.

If you could not have thought of an ending at that time, you could have ended it on a cliff hanger. Had the story end on the time limit ending and the guy thinking if he should reveil himself.

It would have better if these pathetic Doms had any sense of honor

Trust is the foundation of a D/s relation. If you can't trust the Dommes not to cheat or lie to win, then all bets are off. I'd stomp the bitch who's idea it was the lie.

Sounds like this could be a fun game to play...I would love to have a few women to peg my asshole....