All Comments on 'Hot Midwest Summer Pt. 02'

Great story, can't wait for more. I have one very small ctiticism, Trista and Teranna, I couldn't keep track of who was who. I feel that if you changed one of their names to some thing way different from the other it would have been easier to follow the story. And that is because I get confused pretty easy, I'm probably the only person that feels that way.

It was a great story and thanks for writing it and sharing if with us.

Anon