All Comments on 'Hot night on the town'

Go girl, nice one, but you should have got him to eat you first, nice to see a twenty year old keeping things going. Sadly I'm now in my forties and wonder how much longer guys will want to fuck me and replacment's will be required.

Fantastic story...good first up chapter, has left me wanting more and more. Don't worry 40yr old, there is always someone who is happy to eat your pussy!!

It is surprising that you decided to have use of a club as the place of your story plot. May be some one will call it fantasy. It looked real to me. At 20, this is great attempt. I am sure you will be a known writer. Try Kindle.

Keep it up.

All too often a story ends on a cliffhanger, but the author never posts another story. Very annoying. But other than that it's a good start.

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*****Great FLASH story HOT and SEXY. Thanks for sharing.