All Comments on 'Hot Time in an AirBnB Hot Tub'

First good to see a newbie. But the story yet again it’s not got enough imagination don’t get me wrong it shows you have tried. But it still lacks creativity and imagination in the story. But hey not bad start best advice to you is try a different category you show talent but this category isn’t you . Go try different categories and show people your talent. But stay away from the loving wife category until you prove yourself as a writer you will get no where in this category. It’s BTB stories that are making it in this category.

True marriage

I think it was what true loving wives could be, depending on whether they both agreed its ok to share. It was nice to read a true loving wife story, where with mutual concent, care and respect for the other in the partnership prevailed and all got to enjoy it, with no repercussions or regrets after.

Really good first story i hope to see more from you.

Emma must be a walking pharmacists dream.

Excellent story, felt real and very very sexy...hot!

‘Nuff said!

Thanks for writing!

I wanna Airbnb , a hot tub , and a couple bi girls to go tubbing with ! But I guess I’ll settle for my camper , my tiny , too small for one person , rv shower , that has warm water that quickly turns ice cold , and my trusty old fuckbuddy , my hand ! Oh yeah , your story was way hotter than my campers water ! For real I enjoyed the story , characters felt real and interesting , the flow built into a crescendo without lagging , and the grande finale was cumulative and fulfilling. Good job !

I really enjoyed this story and your snorkeling story too, My wife and I shared an Airbnb hot tub last week and enjoyed tub-side oral out in the woods. Alas, no third participant.

Excellent! Love the loving generous wife theme!

Thanks for writing!

The old two whores and a dick plot.