by 255burner
Very hot. But why was he so reluctant to go nude in the tub with her. Wearing a suit in a hot tub is just plain asinine.
Excellent debut! Do a part 2. His wife sounds like she would be into it.
Hope you write many more stories. Also, would like a part 2 with all three in the tub. 5 stars. Great writing, thanks.
Good premise.
Blah.
"Normally I can last a long time, but the excitement overwhelmed me and I came in her mouth in just a couple of minutes."
That;s supposed to be an EROTIC dedcription of a blowjob. Not!
Two stars.