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All Comments on 'Hot Weather Cold Water Roving Cam'

by taylahmorgan

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Mnghm17Mnghm17over 6 years ago
Could be developed

Interesting and well constructed and written but lacks the bite of a plot twist. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Trite

Formulaic yawn

shyguy7619shyguy7619over 6 years ago
Hot! Hot!...

More stories, please! I am begging you!

KlitomaticKlitomaticover 6 years ago
First Story ?

Well done, looking forward to see more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very Good

Good start, Very Sexy and Erotic... looking forward to reading your next story

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