All Comments on 'HotLanta Ch. 03'

It would appear that you are not reading your readers comments; I still maintain that you need a proof-reader, and they are available here on the Literotica site.

Keep on writting. I loved the story. At last it seems Dre has met his match in Maurice. Waiting for next chapter of these two.

Don't let the critics stop you fron continuing. If they dislike it so much, why are they reading it? Makes you wonder doesn't it?

Hope to see more of your stuff here. Thanks

Look slike he has gone on to other things I saw his work in Flavamen magazine