All Comments on 'Hotter'n the Devil's Balls Ch. 02'

The end? Nooooooo! This is such a slow burning, beautifully plotted erotic tale, Dg. You must let us know how Callie and Matt's venture develops. Woyldn't it be lovely if Georgia got involved too? Only a hint! I'm not telling you how to write your story. You're doing a damn fine job without my sticking my nose in! 5 stars, of course.

He was such a doofus, glad Georgia set him straight. I kind of understand though, we men can be a bit thick sometimes.

I think a 3rd chapter is warranted, maybe merging all 3 businesses and of course their dream wedding at their own place. It was nice to see how this story fit with Georgia's boiled peanuts. 5 stars.

A perfect ending, great romance and a fantastic story

Great story I would love to know more about this couple if you feel like sharing more in the future.

Cheers

SAGE

Treat yourself and pick through the details Daddysgirlfl presents. Nicely done, a writer growing by leaps! NK

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!