by pimtam
Gusty wimps and thundercunts ahead and creamy precipitation pies at lowlife annual toiletfall . Temperature in the sissy’s degrees while the foggy places where the sun don’t shine are overflowing.
Next chapters forecast: uncertain vaguely hot slots and stiff bull-hail and weak pencil flake.
Stay home save and aware of std-cataclysm.
Really excellent start to what is certainly going to be an awesome tale of married lust and cuckoldry. Bring on the next chapter, it's gotta be good!
This is just gross. A husband should never discuss his wife's private (between them only) business with anyone else unless it's for a medical problem. Geez, how disgusting can you get, dumbass?
A couple in their mid-twenties and they're only having sex a couple of times a week? That's not good. And why is he talking about her to others? Is he really that stupid?
Horrible story line. Badly written.
1 star
Do not like this style of story telling, its like a television programme with a narrator. The wife has the microphone followed by the husband then the narrator chips in then back to the wife. Not for me.
Very hot! Looking forward to Ch. 2, 3 4 & more :)
Ignore the negative comments, it says so much that they vehemently dislike a story yet, are trolling around here!
Loved it. Really enjoyed the different points of view! Can't wait for more!
Congratulations
It's a very good story that keeps me waiting for ch.2
Ignore the negative comments, keep going the way you see the story and not the others. If they want they could write their own.
VERY Hot!
We both love the story and look forward to the next part.
Rick & Mary xx