by ChrisAnderson
very tunnel vision. Like no one saw anything? Not even how wet she was as she walked back to her Husband. It was a hot moment yes. But pretty blase in execution. Details, description, be creative. Its like reading the newspaper rather than an erotic story!
ok, but clearly he's on the way to sharing his wife. And if the many warnings are to be believed: watch out you might not like what you get.