All Comments on 'House Hunting with Mary'

that was very quick no buildup at all . a lil boring a predictable but it has potential. buildup a background on hero and mary

I appreciate the comments and constructive criticisms, but most of all, I thank all who have read my stories.

Walt

I enjoyed this story very much. Durham has a clean writing style and tells his story in a very matter of fact manner.

I look forward to reading more.