by Waltdurham
I enjoyed this story very much. Durham has a clean writing style and tells his story in a very matter of fact manner.
I look forward to reading more.
I appreciate the comments and constructive criticisms, but most of all, I thank all who have read my stories.
Walt
that was very quick no buildup at all . a lil boring a predictable but it has potential. buildup a background on hero and mary