All Comments on 'House of Slaves Ch. 02'

Thank you for this submission too.

Don't think you conveyed the power of the odour or taste as strongly as it could have been, they are overpowering, especially the first time.

Very much enjoying the humiliation of the setting

It's obvious you use a spell checker but I feel an editor might help. In both stories of yours I have read, there have been issues with the wrong word being used (two instead of too, of instead of off) or paragraphing mistakes. Although they do not stop the enjoyment of the content they are a little distracting.

Looking forward to reading more