by TheHandsThatLead
I enjoyed this mostly but the part that did bother me was by a lot. I feel bad for what happened to Jill as she did like him before everything. I know he would have had to change her to make things work but making her dumb is so cruel when she did nothing wrong.
@Darque_Lyte sometimes there's just collateral damage 🤷
Having said that, if I got you to feel something for a fictional character, then my work here is done 😁
Great story. Would like a part 2. To see what adventures he gets up to. I'm sure he could get the women in the office working well for him.
@CurrentParameter Thanks, no sequel planned at the moment but you never know.