All Comments on 'How Amber became Ryan's sex slave'

WTF, there best be reprisals. His stupidity is one thing, his callousness is another!

I once went through something similar and it didn't end well.

Good luck to Ryan and especially to Amber! What you wrote, though, while a bit trite what with the Christian town and the naive bimbo Amber, was nevertheless believable, and it gets 5* from me.

He'd better never sleep in my bed. He'd wake up under very dire circumstances Duct tape does wonders on people like him. So does jail.

This is so good and so hot. The only change I would wish for is that Ryan fuck Amber up the ass.

I hope Ryan gets what's coming to him in the end.

Great story would love to hear about where Ryan goes with Amber, also would be great if he fucked her ass

Hi jake! Thought I didn't know if was you.

Ugh, my bad I thought that this was going to be a sexy BDSM story, I must be tired I didn’t realise it was non con. The male lead is a complete and utter pathetic excuse of a human being, just another fucked up rape story. The writing style is bizarre it comes across as having been written by either a 13 year old boy, (ego and bullshit) or a middle aged misogynist. So yeah best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)