by Thors_Fist
Ahh. . . .So good, DEAR AUTHOR, to have BRICK on the move again ! I have enjoyed reading about earlier characters again. I did read every word in this chapter. No skimming. Made me appreciate your EDITOR 's efforts even more. Might be nice if BRICK focused on existing characters more before introducing new ones. Your story needs to be " tightened " up s bit. Really liking ARIEL and her place in MASTER'S life. 5 stars !