All Comments on 'How I Became My StepBrother's Slut'

Awesome!! More :-)

Read this story probably a decade ago. Idk if the uploader is the original writer, but he's using the original writer's name. Just putting that out there.

Good concept but it didn’t really do it for me. Brandon is a selfish lover and likely a dud root without all the mind control. He just wants to stick it in and get off. At least he was kind enough to add other girls to do the job for him.

I would have enjoyed this one more if Brandon had only used his power of compulsion to get past the girl's inhibitions. Then they could later discover on their own that they were fully compliant because they acted without the tingling in their heads. Give them freedom of choice after. Total control is NOT sexy.

I really loved this story! Especially the parts where the women couldn’t control themselves and how he’s planning on expanding his harem. Would absolutely love to see sequels if you’re thinking about making any :)

Why not continue this with a part two? Maybe mother daughter two sum!