All Comments on 'How I Met My Husband'

Unreadable. I see the author has 4 other works at this time. I will simply wonder if they are all this bad as I have no desire to torture myself.

Not quite as bad a read as the last person said but you certainly need to get a Proof Reader/Guide/Editor.

Harsh comments, which must be discouraging. English is obviously your second language, so writing a story which flows and is enjoyable to read is always going to be hard, but it’s a nice little tale. Use Word and then Grammarly, and if you can, get an editor who can help you improve. One tip: stick to writing in the past tense throughout - you switch in the same paragraph, and even in the same sentence. This is not a good idea and makes reading frustrating.