All Comments on 'How It Started, How It's Going Pt. 01'

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawgg4 months ago

Messy story , chock full of contradictions and hasty decisions rashly made in the heat of the moment. Very much like life as I know it. The black security guard was a bit of a cliche but overa

Ergo the obvious score.

Full marks *****

CharlieB4CharlieB44 months agoAuthor

Great to see you back LSD.

PervertedKnightPervertedKnight4 months ago

I enjoyed this tale immensely, even though you had the one sentence changing from third person to first person. So are we going to learn if Miss Chastity was fooling around with other guys during the six weeks of purgatory, or am I just imaging things? And is The Tree series finished? Cheers!

CharlieB4CharlieB44 months agoAuthor

I apologise for the error. An occupational hazard when I’m writing 3 different stories at the same time. There is still more to come in the Tree Change series but can’t give a timeframe for the next set of installments.

YourWhiteDaddyYourWhiteDaddy4 months ago

ho humm...another in a long list of bbc fucking white pussy... Prefer to read white cock/black pussy stories

GrendelpuppyGrendelpuppy3 months ago

Finally, a story that acknowledges that the Almighty Condom isn't always effective.

consulting91consulting913 months ago

Great start to the series. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

HotdiggitydogHotdiggitydog3 months ago

Pretty messy situation but I enjoyed the eroticism of the hesitant/consent scene. For the most part we'll written. 5 stars. I'll read ch 2

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Just an amateur scribbler who allows others to experience his daydreams. G’day If you are going through my catalogue you will find a wide range of themes so some you might like, others you will hate. Update. After a flurry of recent activity life has intervened so writing t...