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KaycumsKaycumsabout 2 years ago

Fabulous. Loved it where she told him that she was going to marry him.

strebor190strebor190about 2 years ago

Looking forward to the next part

dyetieddyetiedabout 2 years ago

Loving it. Great work Oliver57

ph1lboyph1lboy8 months ago

Your description of the characters is excellent, when reading this it feels like I'm watching a film, really well written

oliver57oliver578 months agoAuthor

ph1lboy, thank you for that comment! I really appreciate it!

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Just an ordinary guy who loves intelligent, strong, dominant women. My stories are generally about lives I would have loved to lead as the male in them. olivercromwell2004@yahoo.com