by TMONY1
This story is going exactly as I expected.
Public exhibition of the mother, it won’t be long before she’s forced to take other sex partners. There’s no love there, only lust and depravity.
No mother would agree to it and a 20 year old would not have the psychological power to make it happen, especially to his mother.
Making his mother use a lapdancer surrounded by a group of men is ridiculous.
No pensé ser los primeros en leer tu capítulo recién lanzado,estuvo fantástico ,y espero su continuación, pero creo que pasara tiempo,así que éxitos, y estaré a la espera de tu trama....
I didn't enjoy this chapter. I was invested in this story, but not anymore. Unfortunately (for me) the title wasn't cheating. I'm done with this story.
A GREAT story! I can’t wait for the future chapters. Please don’t make us wait!
Great Chapter am still engaged in this story line. Though the controlling is a little out of line for a son and his mother. Maybe toning, it down a little would still work... On the edge waiting to see where this line goes...
the slow acceptance of her son as her true love (and his for her) are what turns me on, yet the acceptance of her with other women was a bit ham fisted, slow your roll dude, you've got a great luscious steamy thing developing here, I'm really digging how he's starting to call her 'Tori' manifesting his transition from son to her equal as her new real lover/boyfriend, next how you kick dad to the curb will become the true measure of the storyline, I'm looking forward to the next chapter
I'd suggest:
- her ambivalence towards any overtures the husband makes to save their marriage, replaced with annoyance towards him
- Cody steps up and claims her, which makes her pussy gush
- more on her confusion as to how she can no longer consider Cody her son but only as her new master (?), the transformation would be difficult for any mother, it's truly what makes the story work, bc this dilemma as so much to the eroticism
Awesome story loved how you built up the love they felt for each other. did not care much about him exposing his mom to other people and the sex around other people to me it hurt the story some but I still gave it 5 stars!!! I hope you contine with more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Overuse of the term, "baby", in the dialogue I noticed in this chapter. I suppose it's better than "hot little slut", but still, it loses meaning and effect when it's overused.
The exhibitionist thing is going too far, especially showing her pussy to strangers in a club and getting lap dances. It's only a matter of time before it turns into fucking other people sadly. It's a dangerous road and honestly is one that's not in line with all the declarations of love and affection and deep feelings that have been expressed so far between the mom and son. If they truly felt this way then the son wouldn't be wanting to expose her like this (it's those young guy hormones and lust in overdrive that fuel it) and the mom wouldn't want anyone else to see her most intimate regions except her true love. Many authors seem to overlook this and just say, "fuck it, that's hot, whatever", regardless of how it fits in with what's been established in the story so far.
I only see one more chapter left so I doubt it's going to contain everything I was hoping for in this story. That being said, it was a good ride while it lasted. Maybe more will be added in future.