All Comments on 'How to Be a Girlfriend Ch. 03'

by WilliamSchaeffer

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woodward about 4 years ago

Disappointing, way to short to advance the story.

Anonymousabout 4 years ago

My 2 cents

I like the follow up. You are establishing the ground work for the other chapters. I think you are building up the relationship that will be there for the three of them. I gave it 5 stars because your style. This is a free story and I am enjoying it. Thanks for your time and imagination.

pocketrocket about 4 years ago

Once again, too short.

Everything up to this point is introductory. You could have posted it in one installment.

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