All Comments on 'How to Break a Man Pt. 02'

by LittleZack

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Why does this keep getting reposted?

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioalmost 2 years ago

Really stupid. Belongs in nonconsent/reluctance. She had the drug evidence, could have trapped him with a camera, knowing what he was planning. Plenty for an arrest and charges of rape. He would have done jail time. Instead, just sadistically beating him up? Might as well kill him and be done with it. BTW, even with torture and beatings, no guy with a freshly broken nose is able to do oral on a woman sitting on his face. Pretty stupid and unrealistic. One star for the length of time it takes the author to delete this post.

LittleZackLittleZackalmost 2 years agoAuthor

@Vulcan_In_Ohio

While I appreciate the comment, I don’t think you read my story. She explains why she doesn’t call the cops quite clearly.

Thank you for your time, however.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awesome story! I loved how you integrated the forced pussy worship and her coming in his mouth. For next parts you should consider having her give instructions that force him to worship her feet and ass. Als, perhaps some head scissors.

Claudia69Claudia69almost 2 years ago

Good Sexy Story...I enjoyed reading about the forced pussy licking and sucking...

MetaBobMetaBobalmost 2 years ago

This is well-written and edited, and intense enough that I haven't been able to read a chapter in one go, yet interested enough to keep coming back. My compliments! However, a couple details rankle, which I will send privately.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

What was to keep him from bitting her clitoris in half since it has twice as many nerve endings as a man's penis she would have been incapascipatated, I presume she would have hit high C and shattered some glass as well, but I know for a fact that she would have been in shock. She would not be about to kick ass.

OK OK this is your gig and it's fiction and the bad guys in Tejas are as dump as a sunbaked Wichita County Jackrabbit 's brains in the middle of July in a wheat field ( yes I've been there 114 degrees 1964 Sheppard Air Force Base). So you get to do what you want to.

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