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Click hereIt was rough, it was humiliating, but at least it was over, and Steven enjoyed the relief as Amber slid off of him, dragging her pussy along his forehead for the final insult. He was done.
Until Josie stepped over and took Amber's place. "I'm next." She thrust forward, covering his mouth and nose with her clean, shaven flesh. "Lick."
It was a long night.
Ridiculous. I know Kung Fu. Investigators would have found all of them laying lifeless on the floor with broken necks. Two practiced moves is all it takes.
I like the first part and the third parts a lot, middle one was good.
BUT, please continue this series?!
YOU CHOSE A GOOD TITLE which made me want to look. Many titles don’t attract the reader which is a pity because you probably miss some good stories because of it.
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You should stick with the same category for each chapter. Changing categories means some readers in BDSM might never see the next chapters. You can always ask for Ch.04/05 to be changed to BDSM without losing views/comments/rating.
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A disturbing story, particularly when you appreciate that it could be reality and not fantasy in this fucked up world, but it did make me want to know what was coming next.
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I think the ratings for each chapter are low, and slide lower each time, because it’s all sadism. All black and white. There’s no colour to it. No depth. No character development. No background to any of the characters. You learn nothing about the two main characters in the first three chapters. I think the slide in the ratings is evidenced by Ch.05 which is just one female after another simply pulverising him.
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I’m favouriting this chapter only because I’m interested as to where it’s going to end and whether the quality improves if you do add more aspects to it than just the sadism.
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Only three ways this can end.