Thanks for the comments, Next couple of stories are in the works including a third chapter for this one! Could be next week, next month or next year though, Since school and work comes first and I'm not getting paid for this ha ha!
Writing stories in a fantasy/sci-fi setting with a generally EXTREMELY unrealistic tone, I like to cover scenarios that are - as far as I know - completely impossible in real life, hence the need for fiction. Topics can include transformation, expansion, mind control, futana...