All Comments on 'How to 'Train' a Husband...'

Well, that was a waste of five minutes. A nonsensical story told poorly.

Makes yo minority brain cells run butt nickid and let yo draw diarrheal stuff, mon.

No Spliffs fo ya this or any time mon, yo no good at it.

Kaya, mon

kind of a stupid story probably belongs in horror not loving wives

I really don't know what I read. Sorry, but that is the truth.

And beyond stupid. Since they didn't marry until the very end, this isn't a loving wives story. Probably should have been posted in Non-con or "stupid shit". The scene in the train car was a joke. She grabs his wrist and he drives his shoulder into her, knocking the wind out of her. The end. Failing that, when she asks him to kneel down, he refuses. What's she going to do? Beat him up in a train compartment. He starts yelling and she gets arrested. Failing that, he gets on his knees and then proceeds to bite the shit out of her. End of story since she now needs immediate medical treatment. The bit at the sorority was wrong. No house on any campus, allows men upstairs. Near the end, what stopped him from simply kicking the crap out of the women? And no man in his right mind asks Anka for a date, let alone asks the bitch to marry him. Why would she want to date and marry a man that needs to be "trained"? You need to go back to the typewriter with this garbage. It was poorly thought out, badly written, posted in the wrong category and just a total waste of time to read.

1 star only because negative stars aren't yet available.

Wrong categorie for depraved NC kink.

In a day of garbage, this smelled probably the worst. There is not a coherent thought in the entire mess.

I enjoyed the anticipation of waiting. I can only wait for your next posting.

This story really needs to be tagged as FemDom. Although usually one person is more dominant in a relationship, this story is NOT mainstream and much more extremist/fetish. Your marriage vows ignore "Forsake all others" - so I would assume either this will be an open relationship (or with her in control she can have as many lovers as she wants, and she'll control when he has pleasure) and of course the word OBEY is only for him, not her. Maybe some people can be happy this way, but I'd like for him to go to SaddleTramp's camp and come back a little different.

Your Story is BDSM not lovely wifes

I never understood what was happening or why, was that your goal?

I actually like femdom as opposed to the other commentors, however my problem is which set of vows will she go with. Cucking him would break the first vows and therefore I am out of there pronto. If it s without cucking then it may be very interesting and a 2nd instalment may show how this proceeds. Maybe the author will write another. Not partcularly well written but interesting content

JJ

Nothing erotic about a guy being turned into a servant.

PPP

I heard a joke in a bar one time, that's the PPP. With patience, persistence, and pussy you can train a man to do anything. I don't hit women... but I came so close to bitch slapping that girl it was incredible. I find it completely repulsive that someone could take another person, they cared for however minutely, and train them like Pavlov's dogs

If there are no objections - hell, I don't care who objects - ANYone who hurts or dis-respects another needs to be shot. But this Femdom crap is too stupid for words and needs to stop now. The key to a good relationship is consent and live by your agreements. No agreements, no relationship. Divorce is final.

Your profile says you are interested in nothing. We can tell that is true.

NFW!

Right? If not well it was really poor.

I have no interest in garbage. If a person doesn't respect another, get away from the on who gives no respect. Respect yourself enough to stand up for yourself.

You have tense problems, mixing past and present in the same paragraph. In fact, tense in generally consistent thought the whole story.

You also have sequence problems. Hands cuffed behind his back, she had him face her and take his hands and open {her} up gently. Physically imposable.

Good try at the "training" pun.

Great start. Wonderful plotting and detail

A very creative and unusual plot. I really didn't know where the story was going, but thorougly enjoyed it, and there's plenty of potential to take it further. There were a few grammatical errors , but those didn't distract too much. Fun, kinky read! Thanks.

Looks like the beginning of a stupid cuckhold story. Think I just wasted my time that I will never get back. Warn people of cuckhold stories so they don't get pissed off.

This wasn’t cuckold as she didn’t duck anyone else. It tended toward femdom more but didn’t quite get there. Definitely kinky but not much to do with Loving Wives

Wrong category and stupid to boot. Just say "I don't" and walk away.