How To Train Your Puppy Ch. 01

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"Daddy... I'm so sensitive. I... ... I can't..." She tries to distract Eric by nuzzling his cock with her face. She starts licking eagerly, desperately, her hands holding onto his thighs for dear life. If she could just stall for a few moments she might be able to retain some of her brainpower. That wasn't going to happen though.

Eric forces her down without care- Pushing her face into her puddle of squirt. Her makeup smears as her face is rubbed on the disgusting floor, dirt and germs clinging to her face, making her look cheap and used.

"Puppy was just trying to get out of her punishment there, tsk tsk." Eric maintains the role of a condescending teacher. "That just goes to show now necessary it is to discipline a Puppy like her." He positions her better, face down ass up, showing her pussy off for the world to see.

"Now... Look what you did Puppy, look at the big mess you made..." Eric turns back to the crowd. "At this point, normal dog discipline will do nicely," He pushes Lexie's face back into the puddle, "What did you do?"

Lexie whines pitifully. "I made a mess, and I came too soon and didn't listen to Daddy..." She starts to whimper after expressing her understanding. Eric started teasing her pussy with the vibrator again.

"I'm glad you understand Puppy. You're gonna take your punishment like a Good Girl, now right?" Before she had a chance to answer he's thrusting the vibrator in and out of her pussy, the toy at a higher setting this time.

"Too much- Daddy- Too much- Feels too good!" Eric looks back to the crowd.

"Soon, she'd gonna be a babbling mess, only able to moan and spew out obscene words, wanting me to pump her fertile pussy with my potent sperm. She's going to beg me to put a baby inside her. Like a bitch in heat, her animalistic urges will overpower any rational though or reason. You could argue the case that she'll be returning to her natural state..." He chuckles, fucking Lexie harder with the vibrator. His own cock is hard and engorged, ready to fuck.

Eric's prediction comes to fruition faster than the audience could ever expect. Soon, Lexie starts chanting, "Too good- so good!" as she gets dumber and hornier. Her back arches and she wiggles her hips trying to feel more pleasure. Lexie's face and body slides over the floor getting the everyday grossness of the train floor on her face and in her hair. She doesn't realize or even consider how slutty she looks; she can only focus on her building need.

Eric grins, watching Lexie descend into depravity, transforming into a cum hungry, fuckdumb little puppy. "She's almost there everyone!" He announced gleefully, holding her hips steady as he tries to control her.

Her pussy is back to leaking like a faucet, maybe dripping even more than before, contributing an unrealistic amount of wetness to the pre-existing puddle on the floor.

"Please- please daddy- oh fuck, please I need it! I need your cock so bad!" Her pussy is spasming.

"I'll take it in my ass, please anything Daddy I need your cock, I need your cum!!" Eric stays still for a moment, admiring the way his cumpuppy arches into the thrust and craves his touch. What a far cry from their first encounter. Eric began to feel warm inside, contented by his superb training and it's effect on Lexie.

"Please Daddy!" she continues to plead. "Please fuck me, I don't care if I'm ovulating! Please just breed me, fill me with your hot cum, I need it!" as her begging reaches a peak, he pulls the vibrator out- smiling in satisfaction as Lexie cries out in frustration. She pants against the floor, and for a moment attempts to finger herself to completion.

"Ah, Ah, Ah," Eric gives the crowd a pointed look and they understand instantaneously. Two of them reach down and grab Lexie's arms, holding them away from her pussy as she writhes in need. Her arms are pressed to the floor and she's forced to wait, her desperate, needy hole begging for more stimulation.

"And now," Eric announces theatrically to the crowd. "I will mount the cum hungry Puppy." He rubs his cock head at Lexie's pussy before slamming it in. Lexie moans and despite her exhaustion eagerly humps and pushes to fuck his cock, her body possessed with the need to get his cum deep inside of her.

Eric remains poised and composed as Lexie fucks him animalistically.

"You see, even as she's exhausted, all her body can think of it think of is getting my cum." He reaches down to her pussy to rub the sensitive clit. "It's all you can think of, isn't that right Puppy? Good Girl, Good Girl."

"Yes!" Lexie cries. "Cum! Cum in Puppy, Daddy. Puppy need cum. Puppy needs to be bred! So good, so good please cum inside me!" Eric moans low in his throat as he hears the frantic begging. It was like music to his ears.

The man goes on, drinking in satisfaction as his kinks are fulfilled. "I'm sure you folks can tell already, but Puppies like her thrive on being degraded, they love it so much that when they're shown their place, they get nice and fuckdumb, and so thirsty for cum."

Every time Lexie hears the word cum her pussy twitches with a mini orgasm. At this point she's been fucked so good; she'll be cum dumb and compliant for the next few hours.

"Need cum!" she chants. "Need Daddy's cum!"

Eric moans as he starts fucking Lexie in earnest. He whispers into Lexie's ear, "Does Puppy love being bred? Does Puppy want Daddy's cum that much?"

"Yes! Puppy needs Daddy's cum! Puppy wants to spend every day getting bent over and bred by Daddy until she's pregnant!" She moans loudly. "Puppy wants to be stuffed with Daddy's cum!"

At her declaration, Eric gives in to his own building pleasure, cumming a hot, thick load of cum into Lexie's pussy. He thrusts through his orgasm, cramming his CumPuppy with cum as she herself orgasms.

When he pulls out, Eric moves to sit on the bench, getting a napkin from the lunch bag to clean himself up. Lexie remains on the floor, still recovering from her orgasm, though she has the mind to whine as she feels a river of cum start to leak out her gaping hole.

Eric orders the crowd to stuff his cum back inside Lexie's hole and they listen obediently, taking turns performing that task and filming the fucked out cumpuppy. "Don't let her get up until all my cum is stuffed in her slutty, cum hungry hole." Lexie lays in a puddle of her own cum, dazed and happy, her hips thrusting lazily into the stranger's fingers.

Everyone at this point is filming, and one man asks Lexie's full name. She gives it without thinking. By this time tomorrow, the multiple videos taken will go viral. Lexie will receive a call from work letting her know she's being "let go". All her friends and family will leave her behind, the only thing left in her life being these sex sessions with Eric. She'll just have to stay home and be bred repeatedly now.

When Eric sees all the cum stuffed in Lexie's hole, he pulls her to kneel in front of him. She first puts her wrecked panties back on, more to keep Eric's cum inside her than to preserve modesty. He presses his cock to her filthy face and she eagerly licks it clean, before simply holding it in her mouth to keep it warm like a good cumpuppy. For a small while she lazily grinds against his foot, looking debauched and slutty as all hell.

When he's satisfied and the train reaches the next stop, Eric stands, dusting fake dust off his pants and reaching back into his bag to pull out another previously concealed item. A collar hooked to a leash.

Eric collars his pet just like any good master would, then pats Lexie's head, cooing at her. "Good Puppy, you'll be bred by Daddy again tomorrow!" Eric guides her out of the train as it arrives at their home station. Naked and covered in cum Lexie crawls home behind him gazing at him as though he were the sun, just like any Good Puppy CumDump would.

They were perfect for each other.


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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Fuck them

Of course noone would ever ruin their sub's life by exposing them (although the urge to just make them do anything is real). That's why this is a fucking fictional story, not a diary entry.

And I love how there are people complaining about him letting her be exposed and how wrong it is, but nobody is complaining about the fact that if this was in real life, he just may have traumatized some people, even children, since he didn't ask anyone's age or for their consent.

It's porn, guys. It's not something that could actually happen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This was really good, but I found it wierd that you kept using the word breed, and I kind of wish she hadn't given her name, and the part about her losing her job and stuff wasn't included. But other than that, this got me through my session ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I liked it fuck their opinions.

GoodCumPuppyGoodCumPuppyover 3 years agoAuthor
Thank You for your feedback!

Thank you for your feedback and criticisms of my writing. I won't lie, it does hurt to hear how greatly you disliked it but hopefully it will make me grow as a writer.

If I may defend some points of this story (it seems I didn't convey enough information about the content), I did not intend for this story to be themed around DDLG or Puppy play. The term "Daddy" I feel extends past that community and I do not support relationships which fetishize children's actions and behaviors. "Daddy" is widely used outside of that community so I'm not sure it's use classifies this as DDLG.. Also, Many of the ideas and concepts from this story are drawn from an online roleplay I participated in some months back, especially the phrase "CumPuppy". Basically I was called that once, found it erotic and inserted it in this story because it appealed to me. I went on to include more things like collars and terms like "petting" or "breeding" to keep the theme of the nickname consistant. Most parts of the story are inspired by the direction of that roleplay. This is just a piece where I built upon it, created characters and fleshed out the setting.

Next, I'm not sure if the comments about the breeding aspects of the story are criticisms or just confusion about the kink itself. My enjoyment of the kink comes from a mixture of the actual feeling of being... inseminated, and the theme's of control it gives the dom over the sub. This story is tagged with the breeding tag, so, if it turned you off, I'm sorry but I don't think that particular criticism is valid. Same thing with ShadowRosie's critique, this is a story placed in the exhibition tag so I'm not sure why you're upset about Lexie being "exposed" to "pervs and rapists". The crowd in this story didn't rape or overstep with their involvement in the narrative. They touch her, sure but they respect Eric's request not to fuck her or taste her, and don't engage in behavior that would make her any more uncomfortable than what's already going on.

Now, the ending.... I wrote that ending because I was planning to set up their next sex-capade, with even heavier themes of breeding and control. Because it's a piece of fiction, I took it as far as I could to both invoke a reaction and inspire interest. It seems that the reaction it invoked in you was disgust. My bad but like I said these aren't real characters so I think taking the story to that extreme is moderately okay.. Also, I don't personally see it as a horror-esk story because in the prequel I have planned where the characters first have sex, Lexie discusses how little control she wants in the relationship and how badly she wants to be humiliated. Of course, you were not aware of my intentions or plans as a writer so I'm not all that upset by your perception. But yeah, the content- Nothing would humilate me more than having the wild and kinky sex I had on a public train go viral, so that'd kinda where that came from haha.

One thing, I'm surprised none of you seem to be upset over the aphrodisiac he drugged her with to make her extra responsive. That was, in my opinion one of the most problematic aspects of my story but if you're not complaining neither am I.

In future stories I'll work to include more warnings so those of you who were disturbed / uncomfortable with the content will have a better warning and be able to avoid kinks youre not a fan of.

Anyway, I know the commenters probably won't see this- either way I'd like to provide some insight into this story for any others who stumble upon it and feel the same way as these commenters do.

Also I'm probably overreacting to criticism by typing a response this long, but I've already spent a good chunk of time writing it so I'll post it anyway.

-GoodCumPuppy

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Despite this being (apparently) about *Puppy Play*

It’s also heavily based on DD:LG which you should (ideally) include in the Tags. Personally it’s a massive turn off, although it’s a kink that apparently lots of people enjoy. *Breeder* stories are also an epic turn off they make my skin crawl. I genuinely don’t understand the appeal; is it supposed to make the male protagonist feel more manly? I don’t get how a fantasy/ pretend pregnancy in a fictional story is meant to be sexually arousing??

I know you included a caveat that this is supposedly consensual/ dubious consent and that they use safe words etc BUT and it’s a fucking humongous but - shitty wannabe Dom has effectively FUCKED UP HER ENTIRE LIFE : job, family and friends all gone. In one fell swoop he’s failed as a Dom, failed as a partner, pretty much failed as a human being. Unless that was his intention? Is this supposed to be some kind of weird hate sex? I couldn’t stomach reading all of it and quit part way through and skimmed the rest.

As a pice of writing it’s actually quite well done and I’m sure plenty of people found some or all of this sexy but it just comes off as a bizarre horror story to me. So 1 star from me. Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (UK)

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