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Click hereMonday night, Becky called Jenny for their Monday Morning Quarterbacking talk to review our swap session. I listened hard, but I only heard some of it.
"... of the month?"
"...one of the wives ..."
"...how many couples?"
"I don't know. Have you asked Sam?"
"....really? I just don't know. Not yet anyway..."
When they hung up, I asked, "What did y'all talk about?"
Jenny looked funny. "Lots of things. Mostly about what to do it the future. I think the four of us need to have a serious talk, without any sex. Just talk about it."
I was very curious, but she would not say more.
Wow. Tough crowd.
I love the stories and the thought that has gone into them. It feels very real and exciting. Please keep writing.
Well paced and interesting. Some grammatical errors. Some details like the scrabble game rules could be better explained, especially for those who do play and know the game well. It could use a bit more personal insight into the various characters thinking, but not needed yet. This will be relevant when the dramatic crises hit. The ramping up of drama is done well. In my opinion, bringing the emotional aspects to a boil slowly is the better approach. Good cliff hanger ending again.
Anonymous, I do indeed hate these stories, and I believe that any woman who participates in swinging is in fact a whore. The idea that she must be a “ whore without a conscience “ is the only way that such a person could live among normal people. This also applies to the men, as both are hiding their true nature from the world. Your suggestion that I leave Literotica is rejected, although you are correct in your observation that I have no empathy for the people in this type story and the “lifestyle” it represents. There are many good stories in LW, although not nearly enough to drown out this type garbage, or the even more fulsome cuckold stories. If you like this type work, then by all means support it. But I don’t like it and I will comment as I see fit. I suggest that you avoid my comments, and thus avoid the pain that they cause you. There are hundreds of anonymous, so no one can direct a comment at you keyboard cowards. Your comments don’t bother me at all, but I will answer you as much as it is possible to answer nobody.
26thNC - as you obviously hate such stories why do you read them? And if you did read the story you obviously didn't read it very well - which one of the ladies was a "whore without a conscience"? (and why doesn't this equally apply to the men?). None of the protagonists seemed to be without a conscience - they all cared for the emotional and physical needs of their foursome. I suggest you leave Literotica as you obviously don't have any empathy for the genre or the openness to the world it represents.