by DiMSuMoRe
That was so hot.. he is a jerk but still gives me a severe case of chick chubb.. wish this story was finished
Ruaraidh which means "red king" in Gaelic is obviously that and more. He, unfortunately, has been disconnected from his wolf for a while and doesn't recognize his mate has been "made" by his wolf. He is in for quite an awakening with Chiara and it is nothing she will do to initiate this. Too bad Aine.....hahaha.
Really.......really digging the regal presence and absolute assumption of power. This is the most impressive Alpha encountered to date. His presence is palpable. She doesn't have a clue as to who this potent creature is and his influence.
I keep hoping that there will be more to this story aside from these three chapters. Please post more!!!
I usually do not read stories of this subject, but I am really really enjoying the character development...GREAT...NEXT!!!...Please!!!!
Wow...that was so hot!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Please update soon :)
This story is was so hot can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for not leaving it where you had planned to. I would have had a fit. It's really good and you release chapter 2 fairly quickly. Appreciate it, till next time...
That was intense!! THAT'S what I call an Alpha Male. Will definitely be keeping an eye out for the rest of this story as it progresses....
That was perfect, except for a few gramatical errors. I'm loving the story, the feel of it and all. Why didn't you put it under non human though? Please don't stop, this is one of those stories I'll be keeping a very keen eye on.
that was so hot!
but maybe pull back on the cockiness a little, he almost stopped being hot. and it's sexy that he's demanding but for some reason, the voice in my head has his voice down as emotionless and robotic...and pussy is much sexier than cunt.
but this made me so hot!!!! now i have to go pay my husband a little visit...
thanks!
thank god you didn't leave it at the beginning of the limo ride. It is a very good story... keep writing.
Thanks for not listening to the little demon inside your head that told you to stop because along with a very funny and interesting beginning was a sexy, super-hot ending. However, the little devil in me can't wait for Chiara to set him straight because he went past alpha to cocky bastard a few miles back, a delicious cocky bastard, but still...can't wait for the next installment.
You do only live once, and thank so much for not leaving the installment where you originally planned to as a poster said that would have been sinister......JV
Bossy much? lol. I FULLY appreciate you not ending the story where you originally thought to, that would have been sinister. Lexi, shy. I never would have guessed based on how she talks around her girls. This is one hot story right here!