All Comments on 'Hucow Farm Life'

Good story and generally well written. Unfortunately, there are many places where you use an apostrophe incorrectly. In particular, one should never use apostrophe s ( 's) to form a plural. It's a real pity, because it distracts the reader from what is otherwise a good read. I suggest you find an editor who can help you with this issue.

So much potential, but it was ruined by poor grammar and mistakes. Get an editor, or proofread it closely

Great story..... soft BDSM.

You should get an editor to re-read your story. Lots of grammatical errors but the content is solid.