by Sarahcheer
Sarah you have some of the best stories, i loved this one giving us a glimpse of all the animals. My favorite being puppy and pony of course! Thank you for posting and great story!
this is one of the hottest stories i have read in a long time... keep them coming to keep me cumming, please!!
A wonderful piece of fantasy with lots of lovely feelings/smotions from Sarah. This story is really worthy of a five bar for three small points:-
1. Right at the start Sarah's boss says -" "Sarah, we have gotten calls from the town council that a new park has applied for a permit to build a human zoo out on International Speedway Boulevard over by the former county jail site. As you know, the locals seem to go wild when a new zoo is built, and it always seems to generate tourism. ...... " - this indicates quite clearly that the zoo has applied for a permit to be built, but Sarah goes teh next day to a completed zoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2. We are not told how Sarah got home safely with her friends. Did she tell the zoo she was press and would be missed and that she would not report on people being drugged? Did she just get in her car and drive out? Did she have to crash through the gates?
3. How does she know Sparkle's mind cannot be restored? Oh yes and did she get her six figure bonus, must have to pay for the computer.
Other than those small points i really enjoyed this story. Hey if there was a zoo like this in south-east England i will get a sex change operation and join the zoo asap.
Five stars for the creativity and imagination!
While BDSM isn't my cup of tea, I got this on a friend's recommendation and found it an interesting read nonetheless.
Story was okay. Your language and grammar is crap. There were loads of errors on each page, some were just plain laziness and others actual grammatical errors.
For example: thru instead of through.
Next time proofread your work and fix it before uploading it. Then writers like me can actually enjoy it instead of raging at your third-grade reading level.
The story line was okay, but your grammar and spelling sucks. Seriously, who says thru?
I have a thing for human pets and this story played right into my interests. It's like it was written just for what I wanted. Amazing.
You can get over the grammar and spelling mistakes, because seriously, the story-line is just fucking amazing.
5 star. I want to read more.
I have had a fantasy of me being feathered and made to hatch eggs after seeing the 'Tweeting Bird' video on Bathory Tales site.This story fulfilled my fantasy to some extent...even enjoyed the cow girls.
http://www.bathorytales.com/en/preview_bt05.html
I had to stop at "dictator for life Obama" in 2020, having just lived through that year.
Jeez I wish.