All Comments on 'Hungry'

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JaceyTreyJaceyTreyover 3 years ago

How old? How young? Married? Involved in an affair? Permanent or temporary?

Who knows, who cares?

JaceyTreyJaceyTreyover 3 years ago

My first comment was sent without me being finished with it! I loved this! I was trying to say, that this story didn't need the details one usually ascribes any type of erotica. It is wonderfully crafted, and especially from a seldom heard point of view, and seldom written tense. Current tense? Almost past tense? It was great! I think the tense, as well as the feminine point-of-view, is so unique in this case. We have plenty of stories about women. We have stories that are from the female perspective. It's the combination of POV and the feminine that strikes me in my mind. Very well written!

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