All Comments on 'Hunted in the Night Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
A 5-Stars story

Oh please, don't stop now, write more. I am a little confused about the blue blood. Any other werewolf story I've read the blood is the same as a human's, red. Also the spines on his dick is a new one to me. I am not complaining, just making an observation. The story is well written with a good story plot and good character development. I hope to see more of this excellent story. I did give you 5-STARS for your story Retired Army NCO

RavensingRavensingabout 7 years agoAuthor

Thanks Anon for the kind words of encouragement. I was debating if i should add a second part or not since this story doesn't seem to be doing as well as some of my others, but I think you have convinced me to write at least one more part. Look for it in a few days!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
So far...

Was dissapointed that there wasn't a page 2. Please write more. This one story has led me to your others but, for some reason... THIS is my fav. So far..

RavensingRavensingabout 7 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2 is coming

It is scheduled to come out tomorrow.

HaydenDLinderHaydenDLinderover 6 years ago
Kinda got mixed feelings.

I gave you 4 stars because it's a good story AND I do want to read the other chapters. I just don't think I'll ever want to read this again.

It was the breaking her wrists part. Way too far for me.

Still, very well done.

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On makeshift bedding in the cucumber garden, the hilltribe girl clings to her exhausted lover. Limbs still chaffing with pleasure, dissolving against him she now and again with one bare foot jostles a shell necklace that hangs from a vine on the fence - rattling it though th...

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