All Comments on 'Hurricane Bob Pt. 03'

Not as cringe worthy as the last chapter. Looking forward to how you spin this yarn.

I still don't understand why anyone would be friends with Mike the Mooch. He sounds like a complete douche bag to me, and Bob needs to quit being the gravy train. The girls seem like jerks as well. I hope our hero dumps everyone when they get back home and moves into a gated community. 3 stars from me.

Hopefully he acts on how feels and just stops giving a fuck. Then just starts fucking whomever without remorse.

@jazzharp its a story about growing a pair of balls

My cringing is a testament to your skill as a writer. I did give you a four! Dumping Connie in the hot tub was the pivotal scene. And I'm waiting patiently for the storm to come ashore.

Parts 4 and 5 have been posted. I did them a day apart. So, I expect to see part 4 tonight or tomorrow night and then part 5 (the conclusion) the day after that.

Hurricane Bob hits in part 4 but the storm doesn't hit until part 5 :)

@PervertedKnight - re friends with Mike. I think we all know someone like Mike. He's the kind of guy that can be your best buddy one minute and your worst enemy the next.

@Jazzharp - I didn't take any umbrage with your comment. I was just pointing out that the MC starts out unable or unwilling to stand up to Mike, but will he ever? I figured you were cringing from either 1) Bob being a wuss or 2) the herpes chick

Why would anyone tolerate Mike????

I'm not much more impressed with the ladies. They are all somewhat scummy?

The MC seems like a solid guy who doesn't mind partying but everyone just kind of disrespects him?

I kind of like the MC but he takes way too much shit off of idiots.