All Comments on 'Hypno-Submission Pt. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Fantastic works as always, excited for another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Great story !

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Looking forward to C taking a submissive trip

sjoshProud2ServeUMaamVAsjoshProud2ServeUMaamVAover 3 years ago

So how do i see this video, or does it only work on young women ???

ss6504ss6504over 3 years ago

I think you're anal=phobic - get over it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Stop Drawing it out....more is better

I would keep it to a multi-page submission rather than a 10 part series. More parts doesn't mean that we'll rate it higher for longer, it might actually do the opposite. It has great potential and a great story, just give us more each time, not 1 page at a time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Programming

referring to everything going on as a "programming assignment" has made me love this series all that much more. So clever and brilliant!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
When?

I really want to see how this story plays out. I love how you've written how the hypnotism slowly breaks down their will. It's great!

liz33ndliz33ndabout 3 years ago

what a great story, i wonder how many people are doing a hypno search for this fantasy video. keep writing, i am loving it.

LBCNLLBCNLover 2 years ago

Been loving the story so far, though really hating the text speak (God that is SO annoying, childish and just totally unintelligent). Also, I am really dreading the impending incest. That is really not my thing (nor should it be any one elses for that matter if you ask me).

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I agree with the comment made earlier, 1 or 2 page chapters suck. Anony Mous

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