by Boratus
So how do i see this video, or does it only work on young women ???
I would keep it to a multi-page submission rather than a 10 part series. More parts doesn't mean that we'll rate it higher for longer, it might actually do the opposite. It has great potential and a great story, just give us more each time, not 1 page at a time.
referring to everything going on as a "programming assignment" has made me love this series all that much more. So clever and brilliant!
I really want to see how this story plays out. I love how you've written how the hypnotism slowly breaks down their will. It's great!
what a great story, i wonder how many people are doing a hypno search for this fantasy video. keep writing, i am loving it.
Been loving the story so far, though really hating the text speak (God that is SO annoying, childish and just totally unintelligent). Also, I am really dreading the impending incest. That is really not my thing (nor should it be any one elses for that matter if you ask me).