All Comments on 'Hypnotherapist Ch. 01'

Good start so far. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes.

It's HIPAA

Well... yep. I misspelled HIPAA. That's embarrassing. I'll try and get a edit submitted.

Great start. A couple of spelling mistakes and wrong words, mostly near the middle, but overall pretty good.

Great premise. But the story needs to be continued and brought to a conclusion.

Chapter 2 is pending being published and will hopefully publish soon.

I like this concept. Pretty good start..... I hope it continues

Your 'nom de plume' matches the wickedly devious nature of the concept! Good appetiser, I'm interested to see where this series goes ........