All Comments on 'Hypnotic Pocket Watch Pt. 01'

by Kinkynfit

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
SouperKev777SouperKev77711 months ago

I agree how is he 28,but I think that’s a typo on your part. But I love the story and hope for many chapters!!! Keep up the great writing!!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Great story. looking forward to the second edition.

gem4tnagem4tna10 months ago

Needs more chapters great story

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Oh shit this soo good!!! Keep them coming!!!

LWLover60LWLover604 months ago

Favorite line: "Incest is cool as long as we keep it in the family."

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userKinkynfit@Kinkynfit
Everyone is a critic these days. If you don’t like the way the story reads then find one you do like or better yet, write your own. Enjoy, jerk off and have fun!

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES