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All Comments on 'Hypnotic Pocket Watch Pt. 05'

by Kinkynfit

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BaldsantaBaldsanta3 months ago

I enjoyed some aspects of the story but for me , it became to dark. I hoping to see him change and have many adventures

gypsyviolingypsyviolin3 months ago

Best chapter so far, bit dark but ok

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Way too dark, nothing good will come from this piece. To inspire evil in others without choice reminds me of the horrible world we live in now. A very sad state of affairs and you are speeding it along.

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Everyone is a critic these days. If you don’t like the way the story reads then find one you do like or better yet, write your own. Enjoy, jerk off and have fun!

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