All Comments on 'Hypnotrack Ch. 05: The Secretary'

Very hot! I don’t love all the breeder stuff—not my kink—but I really enjoy the way all these women are individually characterized and the sex is super-hot. Keep up the series!

well staged and shared.

Very hot. Can't wait for the next chapter

I love the breeder comments. I want more and I want to hear more details of them actually getting pregnant

I enjoyed the stories. I was wondering if you were going to write about the ideas that are in the stories, including the weekend and finding the other person that likes the same thing, and taking the rest of the office. Plus redoing the video so that he cannot be corrupted or his harem.

One of the best series I've read here. Outstanding work, and SO hot! Only one minor quibble...it needs better proof reading. There are minor spelling errors detract slightly from the story, as they force the reader to take a moment to do a mental correction.

Good story, great writing. Pregnancy isn’t my kink, but I’m still reading, and waiting for each installment.