All Comments on 'Hypnotrack Ch. 07: The Party'

by Verensei

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lrdhawkwindlrdhawkwindalmost 3 years ago

It will definitely be interesting to see just how far down the rabbit hole he already is and may not realize. After all this could easily be not his first attempt since you mentioned that the program can be reinstated during sleep it's hard to tell what attempt this may be and how much better the original programmers have become because of him

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Oh, another chapter! Tis a most pleasant surprise indeed! Can't wait for the next installment! Few minor typos' but other than that! Quite the cliffhanger!

Carpenter91Carpenter91almost 3 years ago

Great story, can't wait to see what you come up with next!

JohnSimmsJohnSimmsover 2 years ago

Just did a binge of this series...thoroughly enjoying it. I like the flow of the writing but would like a few less typo/word choice issues. I haven't re-read but think there may be a continuity issue with Julie getting the fertility app before meeting Mel. It is surprising but I really like that the MC has programmed himself to love his harem mates. Can't wait to see if Love triumphs over the evil machinations of EroticToys!!!

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